Made a Video Thing

Hiya.

Made a little video thing. It's 200% too long, but I think it might be alright.

Anywho, if you're free, tear it apart: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TMAcf718dfo

Arron

Ps. Link me to your stuff.

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I've seen a bunch of your stuff before, and as ever you have lovely screen presence. Also, your delivery of some of the lines is excellent, the drugs is a big word gag, for example - I saw the joke coming immediately, but you still made me laugh when you did it. Same story with that look to the camera in the fiction section joke.

However, you know what I'm going to say, don't you? Over-long, unfocussed and mostly well-worn material/targets. I think I',ll have to give this one the thumbs down, but I'm sure you'll be reeling me in again soon.