Hey,

Playing with a new character and was looking for some feedback from strangers. Please let me know anything you felt worked/didn't and why.

Comments on anything at all from script, performance to general idea would be greatly appreciated

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=3_4nU9eX1Gc

Thanks!!!

I know it's a script forum and hope I'm not upsetting the norm. I just think writers would have valuable feedback to give

Why do you keep posting the same thing?

It's shit btw

Sorry, I'd just registered and had too many tabs open. I didn't think the others had gone through.

Thanks for the response; I'll take your feedback on board. Plenty to think about there.

Can barely hear it and it's out of focus due to being woefully under-lit.
Get a decent mic and 100 watt bulb.

Ya, I need to invest in equip for the finished product Lazzard. Thanks for having a look.

Boring Snoring, please stop! some people are not meant to be in the entertainment industry!!!