Reviews Welcomed on black comedy Kindle eBook

As a newcomer to the site, I will introduce myself through a black comedy eBook ... available FREE on Kindle Unlimited or 99p in UK , equivalent elsewhere. Load a FREE sample below. Your views welcomed.

http://www.amazon.co.uk/Did-Socrates-Get-Pissed-Farry-ebook/dp/B00UCM8FN0/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1427057514&sr=1-1&keywords=did+socrates+get+pissed

Ahem. 99p for 84 pages is not value and not really free as Kindle unlimited has to be paid for.
However, I read the 'look inside' part where you are allowed to read the first few pages.
Your writing style was good but I was probably the wrong person to be reading it. I hate Americanisms in English authors books.
I was hit straight away with 'highway' for road or street then 'brought' for taken. Sorry, I didn't read much further.

Had a little read - tough topic to pull comedy out of. Good on you for completing an e-book. I just write plays, so I'll leave the reviews to the proffessionals.
Have to say I kept thinking, 99p isn't FREE.

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