hiya.

I'm trying to do one of those gag-a-day webcomics, I'd love you guys to check it out.

Feel free to shout at me if you think it's shit:

crimefightingpigeonandmouse.webcomic.ws/comics/1/

Arron

Can I moan at you that your link doesn't work?

The jokes are pretty damn good but the characters and environment have nothing to do with what they're talking about. I'm not a fan of "being random" if that's what you're going for (it's too easy to be random). Also I'd like a bit more variation in the look of the strips - it'd make them a bit more interesting.

But yes, good jokes!

the jokes are excellent but I agree shake up the appearance a little

seriously good jokes though

Nice work, Arron.

My favourite is #5: http://crimefightingpigeonandmouse.webcomic.ws/comics/5/

(Fellow forum users, for a list of the cartoons in question, please see the Archive page below http://crimefightingpigeonandmouse.webcomic.ws/archive/

- Gusto

Nice characters, but it'd be better if you didn't just repeat each frame. Try using a bit of close-up.