Never Touch/ Dark Humour

Hi everyone. I have just created a short film which depicts how bullying can affect an individual, which can lead to depression, lack of self esteem and worse whilst exploring themes of desperation, love affair and even dark humour (which is why I am sharing it here). It took me a while to make and I wasn't sure where else to go, so I thought seen as there are a couple moments of dark humour, some of the users of this website could give me a review. Thank you very much:
Directed by Matt Senior and Written by two time emmy award winning author D.M Larson, I hope you enjoy: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fr8kD1fKOvc (Apologies that this film doesn't centre primarily around comedy).

Yo Matt.

I thought that was very well made, well done. The fast rewind after the shooting was really effective.