COP: Sir, step out of the car.

GUY: What?

COP: [Flashes badge]

GUY: [Getting out of car] This is bullshit.

[COPS KID GETS IN BUMPER CAR]

That's neat and a nice joke

But for 2 things, the directions seemed a little unclear

Also I think the kid could get much more Dog Day Afternoon pissed about things

(and maybe we don't see it's a kid till they get out?)
nb what do you do with your sketches?

I just mainly post them on Twitter, hence how short they are, but I agree, could be expanded on and the reveal be even better.