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indeed - if it got a series how does episode 2 work? none of the characters have any tie to each other????


Quote: Aaron @ May 19 2008, 11:51 PM BST

It just didn't feel like it had direction. And all of that weird makeup? I'm sorry, but no. It had no one setting so didn't really work as a sitcom, and apart from people hating a movie of a book, there didn't seem to be any story. Just didn't work at all for me.


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Quote: M Lewis @ May 19 2008, 12:14 PM BST



Although I'm no fan of "wacky situation" instead of descent writing so who knows.



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Quote: David Chapman @ May 20 2008, 12:41 AM BST

That's the sort of writing I'm good at.



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Hated it, weak uninteresting characters stumbling through a very old comedy trope.

The old we need a ticket urgently.

Unlikeable characters, with poor cliched lines.

And if you're mocking a subject, get the source material right (check out Galaxy Quest). I didn't see the Delta books as anything other than a cheap McGuffin.
 

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That girl, who was also in Lead Balloon, has got to be one of the most annoying people on T.V.
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Fun, but not funny.

Ophelia Lovibond. Great name (and pout at the end).

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I think I might be going against the trend here but there wasn't much about this that I didn't like. By far the best of the bunch so far, interesting direction and really strong performances all round. Scots bloke was outstanding.

As to it's legs, it's just a boy chases girl story - character based. The Delta sci fi stuff is kinda irrelevant and if that isn't front of stage for the eps I don't see a problem really. Single camera so they can stick it where they like really.

And I did laugh out loud a few times.
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Okay, but nothing special. And I did find myself watching the clock almost as much as the screen when it was on.
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Of all three pilots, I'm going to go against the trend and state that despite its lack of stylistic direction, Placebo was by far the superior.
 
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Placebo was probably the most interesting idea, fluffed by crude writing and dreary acting. There is still a great comedy to be made out of the idea of drugs testing trials.
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But the crudity was what made it funny! I would be THOROUGHLY disheartened if it made a full series and dropped that.
 
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I'd forgot about making any of three into a series. None struck me as having that much potential.
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That is, however, very true.
 
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Is that it for pilots now? Just those three? Or are there more to come?
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Quote: chipolata @ May 20 2008, 10:47 AM BST

Placebo was probably the most interesting idea, fluffed by crude writing and dreary acting.




A chocolate teapot then .... a show about nothing much can be great with a good script but the most interesting premise is pointless if its all it has. You dont need wacky situations to be funny, you need to be funny.
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