EDIT
Had an idea for how I can turn this into a proper sketch so I'm scrubbing out this doodle. Cheers for your comments, you've been a help.
How I lost my job as a censor
Hmmmm.... 
Is that a comment? It is now!
A good kernel of an idea, but doesn't quite work? Maybe use as your base movie a clip where, as well as missing the cues on when to 'bleep', the censor has a dialogue with himself as to whether or not some of the words are actual swearwords or not...?
Or maybe not, whatever, do what you like, you know... 
It comes across a bit muddled to me, David. I was hoping to see you sat round in a studio doing post production bleeping where you argue whether a swear word is really that offensive.
I got it, it was neat and funny a clever little idea
Quote: Tim Walker @ December 22 2010, 5:04 PM GMTHmmmm....
Is that a comment? It is now!
A good kernel of an idea, but doesn't quite work? Maybe use as your base movie a clip where, as well as missing the cues on when to 'bleep', the censor has a dialogue with himself as to whether or not some of the words are actual swearwords or not...?
Or maybe not, whatever, do what you like, you know...
Cheers, Tim. I know what you mean, there's something slightly off about it. I went for simplicity but I think it might have come out too simple for it's own good...
Quote: Ben @ December 22 2010, 7:19 PM GMTIt comes across a bit muddled to me, David. I was hoping to see you sat round in a studio doing post production bleeping where you argue whether a swear word is really that offensive.
Well, this one was just a re-dub idea I had that I could edit on my laptop. There's something in it I think, I'm just not hitting that high note...
Quote: sootyj @ December 22 2010, 9:02 PM GMTI got it, it was neat and funny a clever little idea
But it could be so much better!
Put together a sketch spring-boarding from the original experiment. Comments welcome...
I prefer the original which could be a little neater.
Very reminesent of Not the 9 o'clock news.
Wait... Didn't the Slagg's write this sketch?!
Didn't see the original do can;t compare the two but I liked the idea.
I'd maybe have had Censor #1 being censored a couple of times by the Censor Censor before the Censor Censor is revealed. The end becomes a little muddled/rushed also - so much censoring you kind of lose track of what's happening. And the Censor Censor's glee seemed a little misplaced to me - but maybe that's just me.
It did make me chuckle though!
Bo.
I did lose track a bit.
But the idea was great.
I will give it another watch though as it was funny
Yeah, there's a lot going on in this sketch in a very short space of time. Might be a case of choosing another, longer sweary scene we can work to. I like the idea of a censor censor but it's just not gelling right now. Third time's a charm (I hope).
You kind of lose track of the film bit because of everything else going on at once.