Wacko Jacko is Backo!
On Saturday 7th March 2009 GMT at 2:22 PM GMT, ShoePie said:
Decided to remove, Sorry.
On Saturday 7th March 2009 GMT at 2:39 PM GMT, ShoePie said:
EDIT: Comment removed as it related to a question I no longer need to ask. 
On Saturday 7th March 2009 GMT at 5:41 PM GMT, Kevin Murphy said:
The joke rate was good and fast.
For the penultimate line, I would have written, "But because you're clearly insane, let's call it £30m" or something.
On Sunday 8th March 2009 GMT at 6:10 PM GMT, ShoePie said:
Thanks Kevin.
On Sunday 8th March 2009 GMT at 7:09 PM GMT, Renegade Carpark said:
Liked the premise and the girls line, very good.
As the entire Jackson clan is practically bankrupt, I'd have played with that a little more, with the promoter trying to reason the cost of the stage show and the other Jackson's trying to get in on the act.
On Monday 9th March 2009 GMT at 6:44 PM GMT, swerytd said:
Hey ShoePie
Feels a bit long. I think you need to find one aspect of the show and stick to that as it feels a bit all over the place at the moment.
Dan