The Adventures Of Space Gerbil

Hi All

Quick cartoon of mine:

http://youtu.be/0sLmqYhMAoE

Looking forward to your thoughts.

Cheers
Yacob

A lot shorter than I was expecting! But quite funny, and nicely put together.

I'm imagining any further adventures could get quite repetitive though...

Thanks Indigo

Yes, I don't think this sketch would work as a runner. One is enough.

When I noticed the length, I guessed the joke before the titles were over. However, still a nice sketch but may serve better as a .GIF, plus it might go a bit more viral that way.

Quote: Lee @ 19th December 2014, 12:21 PM GMT

When I noticed the length, I guessed the joke

Yes, me too, that's the problem with YouTube. But it would be funny in a sketch show amongst longer pieces :)

Cheers guys. Thought the length may make it predictable. Darn.

Quote: Lee @ 19th December 2014, 12:21 PM GMT

However, still a nice sketch but may serve better as a .GIF, plus it might go a bit more viral that way.

Do people still use gifs?

Another quickie from me if anyone wants to take a look (didn't want to make another thread for it): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fmCLSvdhY60 .

Quote: Yacob Wingnut @ 21st December 2014, 10:17 AM GMT

Cheers guys. Thought the length may make it predictable. Darn.

Do people still use gifs?

Eh? Memes, gifs and the rest rule the internet.

Quote: Yacob Wingnut @ 21st December 2014, 10:17 AM GMT

Another quickie from me if anyone wants to take a look (didn't want to make another thread for it): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fmCLSvdhY60 .

Made me laugh, good build up and release (actress; bishop).

I think it would work well as a transition on a sketch show. I have a younger sibling and it looks like something that they would watch on TV.